Immortal

Once I’ve become Immortal, my attempt to conquer the world shall begin. I, Zhong Shan, in order establish a supreme heavenly dynasty, must marshal all the luck that I can gather to cleanse my own karma. Then I will have the strength to fight heaven itself, create a new world, and live forever. First: Fate Second: Luck Third: Feng Shui Four: Cultivate Inner Virtue. Five: Fame To gain eternal life. To obtain fame, one must establish a heavenly dynasty and amass the luck of the world! To cultivate inner virtue, one must establish holy sites and accumulate an immeasurable amount of merit! To cultivate Feng Shui one must learn to communicate between yin and yang and control the powers of heaven and earth! To cultivate luck! To cultivate fate! Ask the whole world, who can have eternal life!

Original Publisher

qidian

Original Language

chinese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on *Immortal* *Immortal* is a web novel that grabbed my attention with its unique premise and seems to have resonated with many readers, though not without a few caveats along the way. Overall, I found it to be a compelling read with a refreshing take on the xianxia genre. ### First Impressions The beginning is definitely one of its strongest points. The protagonist starts as an elderly man, a former Earth transmigrator, who has spent decades building a business empire while yearning for a chance at cultivation. This unconventional start, focusing on a mature and cunning MC, immediately sets it apart from the typical power-fantasy cultivation stories. I was intrigued by this different approach. ### What Works Well Many readers praised the world-building, which incorporates Chinese mythology and history in a seamless and engaging way. The author's ability to weave together historical and cultural icons into the narrative creates a vibrant and familiar yet alien world. The empire-building aspect also stood out, adding layers of political intrigue and warfare that enriched the usual cultivation plotline. The supporting cast is well-developed, with characters remaining relevant throughout the story, and the romance, while featuring a harem, is handled with more depth and individual love stories than I often see in this genre. The MC's intelligence and strategic thinking are also highlights, resolving situations with words and plans rather than brute force. ### Areas of Concern While the beginning is strong, some readers felt the quality dipped as the story progressed. Some felt the later arcs became repetitive, with predictable enemies and a reliance on the "damsel in distress" trope. Additionally, some expressed disappointment with the ending, finding it rushed and unsatisfying. Translation quality was also a recurring concern, with some translations being difficult to read. ### ⚠️ Spoiler Warning Some readers were disappointed when the MC's adopted sons betrayed him. Others felt the MC didn't take revenge on the first villian as he escaped. Some also felt the MC's cultivation was nerfed arbitrarily. ### Final Verdict Despite some flaws, *Immortal* offers a refreshing and engaging take on the xianxia genre. Its unique premise, well-developed world, and strategic MC make it a worthwhile read, especially for those who appreciate a more mature and nuanced cultivation story. However, be aware that the quality may dip in later arcs, and the ending might leave you wanting more. I'd recommend giving it a try, but approach it with realistic expectations.