There’s Something Wrong with this Development!

This script was originally supposed to be about a s*um Gong x cheap Shou– The s*um Gong ab*ses the cheap Shou, the cheap Shou becomes hopelessly apathetic, the s*um Gong becomes a cheap Gong, and the cheap Shou ab*ses the cheap Gong. That should have been the case!!! But the script began to unfold in deviation— The s*um Gong was reborn to the past, and encountered the cheap Shou who also got reborn. The s*um Gong was horrified to discover that the cheap Shou had changed his job and became a sadistic, ruthless, blackened Gong! Ahhhhh Help! The f*cking miserable s*um Gong was taken and defiled, then defiled and taken, then after being taken from the front. He was taken from the back over again, until he finally turned into a loyal dog, sensual, tsundere Shou! PS: The OG!Gong and OG!Shou never had s*x in their past life, at most, they only rubbed and jerked each other off. PPS: Erotica

Original Publisher

long ma

Original Language

chinese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on There’s Something Wrong with this Development! "There's Something Wrong with this Development!" promised a wild ride, and it mostly delivered. With its focus on a reborn couple navigating a reversed power dynamic, I was intrigued to see how the author would handle the complexities of a former scum gong turned shou. And, well, things got *interesting*. ### First Impressions Right off the bat, the novel throws you into the deep end. The premise is definitely eye-catching: a gong and shou experiencing a role reversal after rebirth. The initial chapters are gripping, promising a blend of humor, steam, and maybe a touch of angst. The fact that the male lead had already been reborn before the MC added a layer of intrigue that kept me hooked. ### What Works Well Let's be honest: the smut is a major draw here, and it's definitely...present. The author doesn't shy away from descriptive and sensual scenes, which seem to be a hit with many readers. Beyond the steam, I found the comedic elements genuinely funny. The MC's acceptance of his new role as a "cheap shou" is hilarious, and his interactions with the ML are often adorable, albeit in a slightly chaotic way. The story is lighthearted, making it a fun and easy read. ### Areas of Concern While the premise is interesting, the plot can feel a bit thin at times. Some found the story "so-so" outside of the explicit scenes. Also, the quality of the translation seems to dip significantly after the first few chapters, with many readers reporting MTL that affected their enjoyment. This is a major drawback, as it can make the latter half of the novel difficult to fully appreciate. ### ⚠️ Spoiler Warning Several readers brought up questions about the ending and extras, specifically regarding whether the MC returns to his "domineering" ML or ends up with someone else. There's also discussion about the ML potentially caring for a version of the MC until his original soul returns. These are points to consider if you're sensitive to unresolved plot threads. ### Final Verdict "There’s Something Wrong with this Development!" is a novel that knows what it is: a smutty, comedic romp with a unique premise. If you're looking for a lighthearted and steamy read with a focus on role reversal, this might be up your alley. However, be prepared for a potentially uneven translation experience. I'd say it's a solid 3.5/5 stars – entertaining but not without its flaws.